CK Lynn

Arrg...I can relate. Usually most people stick there fingers in their ears and say "I'm not listening until you speak English" when I talk. It did seema little self-belittling, though.

It was good, but almost not a poem. I think you'd be good at fantasy.

This photo was really cool. Usually you don't see winter pictures where the sky is kinda dark. It's a nice effect.

This was good, but not as god as those "favorites" drawings you posted.

Cool! The drawing was fabulous!. Parts of some of the pictures got cut of, though. Post more soon!

It was very exspresive. I didn't really like the first verse, though.

Wow! The colors are great. Very bright. Her wings/tail thing is really neat. I don't know how the chain fits in. I think she'd at least look more worried.

was interesting. I think the names need work. You refer to Della as a young woman, but she seems older to me.

I liked it, but the beginning didn't flow as well as the rest of the piece.

I liked it. The imagery was really good, even though you didn't describe much, it was really easy to form a picture of what was happening. The colored speech wasa ...

It has a nice rythm, but that doesn't make it a good poem. It doesn't say anything, or have a meaning.

I really liked it. Some of the verses don't seem to fit in, though and it carries on a little too long. With a little rewriting it would be excellent.

The treetops flutter, swaying in the wind, gracefully, like dancers on a sky-blue stage. The rough-barked trunks groan and sigh like souls weary from age and wisdom. The gods breathe ...

I don't know what you mean (falling asleep, maybe? You mentioned dreams.) But I like it

Ever flowing. Always forward. Never looking back. Gone in an instant, water slipping through your fingers. from the present to a memory. Endless days, hours, minutes. Pictures swirl, A whirlpool, ...